Linkedin ghostwriting

How to fix a LinkedIn profile that isn't converting?

Struggling to convert on LinkedIn? Discover expert linkedin writing services by media engine to optimise your profile for better engagement.

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Your LinkedIn profile should be more than just a digital CV. It’s the first impression people get when they’re trying to figure out who you are and whether you’re worth their time. Whether it’s a potential client, recruiter, podcast host, or partner, your profile needs to do the talking when you’re not in the room. If it’s not converting, that’s a clear sign something needs fixing. Maybe it feels outdated, unclear, or just doesn’t show what you’re actually good at.

Many professionals think hitting "open to work" or listing job history is enough, but that barely scratches the surface. A strong LinkedIn profile helps you lead with clarity, highlight what makes you different, and tell a story that guides people to take action. If it’s not generating profile views, connection requests, or DMs about your offer or services, it’s time to fix it.

The structure of your profile matters. If your tagline is vague, your photo is low quality, or your summary looks like a dry biography, people won’t stick around. They want to know what you do, who you help, and why that matters within seconds.

Common mistakes we see include:

- A headline that’s just a job title, with no clue about your value

- A summary that’s too long, too short, or sounds automated

- Skills with no connection to actual work or results

- Content that hasn’t been updated in years

- A profile picture that doesn't reflect your professional presence

All these components shape how someone feels about you in just a few seconds. The profile should be easy to follow and make your strengths clear straight away.

Identify the Gaps in Your Current LinkedIn Profile

Before you start rewriting anything, take a step back and look at your profile the way a client or recruiter would. Does it quickly tell them who you are and whether you’re relevant? Or does it leave them guessing?

Try this exercise: Pretend you're landing on your page for the first time. Scroll through each section slowly. Ask yourself, "Would I get in touch with this person? Do I actually understand what they do?" If the answer is no, something's off.

Focus on these key areas:

1. Does your summary sound like your actual voice and explain your work clearly?

2. Is your headline descriptive and interesting, or does it just say a title?

3. Is your banner image helping your message, or is it a generic visual?

4. Do your past roles explain what you achieved or just what you were asked to do?

5. Have you updated your current details to show what you’re focused on now?

Even smaller parts count. Is your featured section showing your best content, or is it empty? Are your contact details correct? This might feel fussy, but each bit contributes to the overall impression. Fixing gaps starts with noticing them.

Optimise Your Headline and Summary

Your headline appears in so many places on LinkedIn that it plays a bigger role than most people think. It’s on every comment you leave, every search result, and every message. If yours just says "Coach" or "Founder," you’re missing the chance to stand out.

Instead, make it speak directly to the people you want to attract. Use it to explain who you help and how. An example: “Helping logistics teams reduce delivery times with better workflows.” That’s clearer, stronger, and gives someone a reason to find out more.

Then, write a summary that brings your voice through. Think beyond achievements and buzzwords. Tell people who you help, what challenges they face, and how you solve them. Keep it genuine and readable.

A simple structure can help:

- Start with who you serve and the problem they have

- Talk about the way you approach solving that problem

- Mention any experience that backs it up

- Close by saying how they can connect or learn more

Skip the storytelling that drifts on or reads like a paragraph from your CV. Use short, punchy sentences and show you understand what your audience cares about. A summary that reads like a conversation is easier to trust and respond to.

Enhance Your Profile with Visual and Informative Elements

Strong visuals help people connect with you instantly. That starts with your profile photo. If yours is blurred, poorly lit, or just doesn’t reflect how you work today, it’s time for a new one. You don’t need a studio shoot. Just clear lighting and a simple background that supports your image in a professional way.

The banner image gives you another shot to say something. If yours is a default cityscape or something with no meaning, you’re missing out. Why not include your logo, a clean phrase that sums up your work, or an image of a product or service that shows what you do?

The featured section is one more place to bring your work to life. Use it to link to posts, project snapshots, or brief client interviews. It should back up everything your headline and summary are saying.

Some things worth adding:

- A quick video introducing your work or services

- Case study snapshots or performance screenshots

- Popular posts that show your perspective

- Joint projects you’re proud of (with permission)

Each one builds a clearer picture, helping someone feel like they’ve already met you before reaching out.

Build Credibility with Recommendations and Endorsements

Anyone can write a polished summary, but others vouching for you is what boosts trust.

If your profile only has recommendations from years ago or none at all, that quiet space suggests your work isn’t being talked about. So reach out to a few people who know your current work well. Past clients, team members, or collaborations from recent months are great choices.

When you ask, make it easy. Share a quick reminder of the work you did together and why it mattered. That way, they’re not scrambling to recall details and can write something meaningful.

Endorsements work differently, but they’re still useful. Feature only the skills you actively use and want to be hired for. Remove anything outdated or vague. After finishing a successful project, ask the person to endorse those specific skills. It keeps your profile fresh and aligned with your current focus.

Boost Your Profile with Media Engine’s LinkedIn Writing Services

Knowing what to fix is one thing. Actually rewriting your profile is another. That’s where professional help saves you time and gets better results.

Media Engine offers linkedin writing services that help turn underperforming profiles into powerful, clear introductions to your brand. We help articulate your value, write in your tone of voice, and build profiles that feel authentic while still driving action.

Our process digs into your story and goals, then shapes every section from headline to summary and even banner recommendations to reflect that. The result is a profile that not only shows what you do but makes the right people take notice.

Whether you're repositioning yourself, launching a new offer, or just ready to stop blending in, tailored support makes your profile one that works without needing to be hard-sold by you every day.

Your Profile Is One Step Away from Working Harder

Changing your LinkedIn profile isn’t just a tidy-up project. It’s a shift in how you present your work to the world. When done right, your profile becomes something you’re proud to share, one that leads people to message you without you chasing them first.

Start with reviewing your headline and summary. Review how it reads aloud. Swap stiff wording for your everyday tone. Then look at your visuals and see what story they’re telling. Refresh your featured section so it shows your best work. And if you’ve been putting off asking for a recommendation, now’s the time.

The profiles that convert aren’t always from the people with the biggest followings. Often, they’re from the people who took the time to be clear and consistent across every section, making it easy for the right person to say, "Yes, this is someone I need to know."

To truly transform your LinkedIn profile and see improvements in engagement and opportunities, it's time to consider professional assistance. Media Engine offers specialised linkedin writing services designed to enhance every aspect of your profile. Discover how expert guidance can redefine your online presence and drive meaningful connections. Let us help you stand out in your industry.

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